What do you think of this poem?

You are very deep inside your own mind and I feel you are playing with all of the words that keep running through your head. The words sound confused but they make a pattern. But the pattern goes up and down and seems at times to fall into depression but you don.t want to be depressed you want to live and that is why I think you wrote this. Some times bad things go away. All things must p yet all time is now. Your next poem must show what your mind has learnt from this poem and how you will start to soar. don't stop writing.